{"product_id":"3-pass-pitch-letter-review","title":"Pitch Perfect Pro: 3-Pass Pitch \u0026 Query Letter Review \u0026 Mentoring","description":"\u003ch2\u003e\u003cstrong\u003e\u003cspan\u003ePitch Perfect Pro: 3-Pass Pitch \u0026amp; Query Letter Review\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/h2\u003e\n\u003cp class=\"isSelectedEnd\"\u003e\u003cem\u003e\u003cspan\u003ePersonalized Editorial Mentoring | 15-Minute Consultation + 3 Rounds of Review of a One-Page Pitch or Query Letter\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/em\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\n\u003ch3\u003e\u003cstrong\u003e\u003cspan\u003eTake your pitch through three rounds of professional feedback, revision, and refinement.\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/h3\u003e\n\u003cp class=\"isSelectedEnd\"\u003e\u003cspan\u003eSometimes one round of feedback is all you need.\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\n\u003cp class=\"isSelectedEnd\"\u003e\u003cspan\u003eOther times, you want to revise your pitch, get another professional perspective on what you've changed, and keep refining it until you've addressed the issues holding it back.\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\n\u003cp class=\"isSelectedEnd\"\u003e\u003cstrong\u003e\u003cspan\u003ePitch Perfect Pro\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003cspan\u003e gives you that opportunity.\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\n\u003cp class=\"isSelectedEnd\"\u003e\u003cspan\u003eDesigned for food, wine, and travel writers who want more hands-on guidance, this service takes \u003c\/span\u003e\u003cstrong\u003e\u003cspan\u003eone pitch or query letter (up to one page)\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003cspan\u003e through three distinct rounds of editorial review.\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\n\u003cp class=\"isSelectedEnd\"\u003e\u003cspan\u003eWe'll start with the big picture: your idea, hook, positioning, audience, and structure. After you revise, we'll dig deeper into clarity, language, flow, and effectiveness. Your third pass focuses on the final details before you send it.\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\n\u003cp class=\"isSelectedEnd\"\u003e\u003cspan\u003eThroughout the process, \u003c\/span\u003e\u003cstrong\u003e\u003cspan\u003eyou remain the writer\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003cspan\u003e.\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\n\u003cp class=\"isSelectedEnd\"\u003e\u003cspan\u003eI won't replace your pitch with one I've written for you. 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Strategy, Structure \u0026amp; Positioning\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/h3\u003e\n\u003cp class=\"isSelectedEnd\"\u003e\u003cspan\u003eThe first review focuses on the \u003c\/span\u003e\u003cstrong\u003e\u003cspan\u003ebig picture\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003cspan\u003e.\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\n\u003cp class=\"isSelectedEnd\"\u003e\u003cspan\u003eI'll evaluate your:\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\n\u003cul\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cspan\u003eCore story idea\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cspan\u003eOpening and hook\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cspan\u003eStory angle and positioning\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cspan\u003eFit for the intended audience\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cspan\u003eOverall 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