Pitch Perfect Pro: 3-Pass Query Letter Review & Mentoring
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💼✨ Pitch Perfect Pro: 3-Pass Query Letter Review & Mentoring ✨💼
Your Pitch. Refined, Rewritten, Ready to Win.
Work with me over three rounds to create a pitch that gets noticed—and gets results.
Ready to take your pitch from good to irresistible? The Pitch Perfect Pro 3-pass review is your personalized path to a polished, professional query or pitch letter that stands out in a crowded editor or agent inbox. This extended mentorship-style service is perfect for food, wine, and travel writers who want thoughtful, detailed guidance every step of the way.
🧠What’s Included in the 3-Pass Review:
✅ Pass 1 – Structural & Strategic Feedback
We'll refine your overall concept, opening hook, tone, and story positioning to make sure your pitch is strong from the start.
✅ Pass 2 – Sentence-Level Edits & Flow
Once your structure is solid, I’ll provide in-depth line edits and phrasing suggestions to ensure clarity, rhythm, and professionalism.
✅ Pass 3 – Final Polish
I’ll help you tighten up your revised version, making final tweaks so it's ready to hit send—with confidence.
✅ Bonus: Includes a 15-minute Zoom kickoff call to discuss your goals and vision.
💡 Why Writers Choose the 3-Pass Review:
🌟 Step-by-Step Support – You’ll never feel lost in the revision process.
🌟 Tailored to Your Voice – I won’t rewrite your pitch—I’ll help you make your voice shine.
🌟 Professional Insight – Learn what editors and agents really want—and how to deliver it.
🌟 Pitching Power – Build skills you can apply to every pitch you write in the future.
🚀 Perfect for You If You...
- Have a draft pitch but know it needs refining
- Want extra support before submitting to dream outlets or agents
- Are serious about pitching consistently and professionally
- Want to learn how to pitch smarter, not just once—but for every future opportunity
📌 After purchase, you'll receive a link to schedule your 15-minute kickoff call and instructions for submitting your draft.
🎯 Don't just hope your pitch works—build one that does.
Let’s shape your story into a standout query that opens doors.
